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Leo Krugeri coloring an shading/detailing part 2

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hoping you guyz like the progress so far. would finish but got a puppy to take care of also lol she takes all my attention an i cant work cuz she'll start whimpering lol
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

You are off to a very good start here. I love his facial expression and design, along with the bagginess of his clothing and his relaxed stance.

A few tips that I have. His hips seem to be a bit off, not fully formed. His Left hip (On the right side of the picture) seems ok, but his right hip (on the left side of the picture) seems "Thin". Like its not all there. Then there is a widening of the pants near the bottom that creates more awkwardness. It doesnt fit with the solidness of the rest of the image. Id say widen them up at the top, almost where they are at the bottom.

My other suggestion is to perhaps work on weighting your lines. They are quite beautiful and suggest intricate detail, but they are the same thickness all around. It might just be my personal preference, but differentiating thickness in lines can really punch up the picture. They also help suggest detail, a thinner line feeling softer and lighter, a heavier line feeling like a much larger difference in surface area, sometimes suggesting a shadow.

Anyway, I really like this image! Good luck with completing it!